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Small things
Posted Sep 4, 2008
The Pros
There some nice flowing lines, and a calm feel to the piece. It was something I could relate to (probably because I'm a Californian), and it had a nice image. I liked the ending as well.
The Cons
There were just a few small disruptions in the flow...
"Surfers riding waves as if at 1 with natures ways"
You should spell out one, that's just a common rule.
There were a few small things here and there. Could be taken care of with a solid proofread.
Final Thoughts
Not really my cup of tea, but I won't vote you down because of that.
Not a bad piece, keep it up.
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