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  • It was rap, and i hate rap, but it was interesting
    by archanon8957
    Posted Nov 18, 2008
    +2
    The Pros
    Interesting. It seems lyrics to a song, But i liked this...kudos
    The Cons
    The ryhming scheme almost worked, and i didn't like how it ended, but it was still good, and interesting.
    Final Thoughts
    Again, im not a fan of rap at all. But this worked. Well done
    Author's Reply
    thanks for the review, when it comes to this kind of stuff I'm really influenced by rage against the machine.
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    • Nov 18, 2008 at 1:18 AM
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