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2 Reviews
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The Pros
There are none
The Cons
Doesnt make sense, and cannot be taken seriously.
The first sentence started an avalance of cliche and melodrama.
Final Thoughts
This will be a comment on a pattern im begginning to recognise, not on your particular story. Im sorry.
Why is it that stories like these get good ratings????
i just read something else that was deep, and it drew you in..it was not perfect by any means, but it received a minus one. Im sorry, but wtf?
Atleast that one drew you in. Please take this constsructively, im not trying to insult you. All im saying is that when i write, i try to steer wayyyy clear of the pitfalls this story, in my opinion, falls into. And the fact that this received good ratings in my opinion is just absurd..
However, i wish you luck.
Author's Reply
Hello archanon8957,
I see what your trying to say, but you also have to understand everyone has their own tastes. To be honest with you, I know I have a lot of work to do. However, out of all the stories I am working on and have planned, none of them are like this one.
I wrote this story with younger readers in mind, as a result it may have cliche in it. Im not sure if anyone recognized this, but the site cut my story off really early, whats posted is obviously is not the whole thing. I will be fixing it soon though.
Once again, thanks for your comment. At least you read it.
1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Its nice
Posted Aug 20, 2008
The Pros
The story flowed well. You have everything explained carefully. I have no need to ask any "whys" .
Your ideas seem to be never-ending. Its quite good
The Cons
Well, I don't see any cons.
Final Thoughts
Yes, I like it. Its interesting. And like reading a storybook. Its good, the way you imported mystical beings into it.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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